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nothing seems to clear now
my world is full of fakes
and i just can't see how
much time this is gunna take
i can't live without you
i watched you close the door
with you not there to catch me
i'll fall forever more

with you i was in heaven
everything seemed right
nothing could go wrong here
was i holding you to tight?
i tried to keep in touch to
check if your alright
but you turned your back and left me
i still cry everynight

and now i will say goodbye
and now i will say goodbye
'cos you turned your back and left me
all alone and hurting
and now i will say goodbye
and now i will say goodbye
'cos you turned your back and left me...

you just can't stop changing
what im seeing is real
my heart is still bleeding
you left me alone to try and heal
and i won't live without you
i watched you close the door
with you not there to catch me
i'll fall forever more

with you i was in heaven
everything seemed right
but something did go wrong there
i was holding you too tight
i tried to keep in touch to
check that you're alright
but you turned your back and left me
i still cry everynight

and now i will say goodbye
and now i will say goodbye
'cos you turned your back and left me
all alone and hurting
and now i will say goodbye
and now i will say goodbye
'cos you turned your back and left me
all alone and hurting

you never told me how you felt
you never told me what to say
you never knew that i was there
all you did was push me away
you always showed me where to hide
never let me have a say
you shoulda known that i was there
dont waste your time
go run away!

and now i will say goodbye
and now i will say goodbye
'cos you turned your back and left me
all alone and hurting
and now i will say goodbye
and now i will say goodbye
'cos you turned your back and left me
all alone and hurting

woah...

all alone and hurting!!!

and now i will say...
i will say goodbye...
goodbye to all the hurt...
goodbye to all the pain...
and now i will say goodbye...
goodbye to what you did...
goodbye to you...
©2005-2010 ~brokensurface1990
:iconbrokensurface1990:

Author's Comments

this set of lyrics are full and do have music to them, but im after knowing if they are good enough to put onto my cd...any info on them is much appreciated

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:iconpolyesthermione:
You've encouraged critics, here I am.. hope I could help you with my little opinion..
I don't like your lyrics at all; your words are too simple,actually too plain, for what you're trying to exrpess, like the most deep sadness, pain etc. Every single one you use have already been employed in whatever other song. Don't forget now everybody try to write because they think they can equal their favorite songwriters.. I just can honestly advise you to dessociate you from others second-rate songwriters!

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:spyed2: 777 Corporation - 'Genius lasts longer than Beauty' :flaguk:

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December 18, 2005
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